Showing posts with label 216. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 216. Show all posts

Sunday, 9 December 2012

Does your mother know about this?

Hello peeps!

If you remember, last Sunday's prompt was "Something you never told your mother."  I have to say it gave me a bit of a hard time.  I really had no idea what I was going to write about.  However, when it hit me, I was so connected with my idea that I even failed to see my boss who was riding the bus right next too me.  My brain is a nice place to get lost in but it's difficult to emerge back sometimes.

Before I post my answer to the prompt however, I want to remind you that you're welcome to post links to your own answer on your blog in the comment section.  I will list the links in the next post for everyone to see.  Also, this week's prompt will be posted later today.

Enough talk, here it is!  Enjoy!

***Prompt 216 - Something you never told your mother.***



My mother lives in a quaint little retirement home nestled between a park and a row of blue houses on a quiet street.  On Sundays, regardless of the sky’s mood, I ride my bike and pay her a visit.  I am never late and she is always on time, waiting for me by the gates.  She dresses fine and looks her best for me.  She calls me dear and flirts with me.  It is our little game which, unlike us, never gets old.

My mother, despite her years, is a sound and healthy woman.  She likes to walk in the park holding my arm, naming the flowers as we pass by.  She’s an erudite and I an avid learner.  When the weather is inclement, we stay indoors and play chess.  No old lady games for her; she is yet in her prime, or so she likes to say.  She wins a lot and I cheat a little.  Her knowing smile tells me my tricks are anything but subtle.

My mother was a librarian.  Her love for books is grandiose, her appetite for written words infinite.  Her eyes, worn out companions, have long lost their sharpness and so, mine take over.  She listens ardently at Dickens by the fireplace but also laughs wholeheartedly at Pratchett in the garden.  Together, we have lived the lives of many.

My mother is sometimes melancholic.  She looks at my blue eyes and tells me her father had the same.  To prove it, she takes me to her room and takes a faded shoe box from under her bed.  She blows the dust off her life and shows me yellowed photographs of long gone people.  A dapper young man. A smiling bride.  A chubby infant.  She tells me little, her eyes filling with tears at time.  I put the memories away and hold her soft hand.   I try to avoid her bare ring finger.  She smiles at me softly.

My mother likes me to talk.  To dissipate the hazy past of happiness lost, she asks me to tell her stories of my life.  I confide in her my dreams and hopes.  I tell her of my wife and children.  I show her pictures and drawings.  She never asks to meet them.  Sometimes, I wonder if she knows.

My mother walks me to the door when I leave.  She waves to me as my footsteps crush the gravel path quietly.  Her eyes are on me as I fail to tell her what I must, as I finger the ring that rests heavy in my pocket.

My mother knows everything there is to know about me. 

Everything. Except that I am her son.

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Sunday, 2 December 2012

The belated first post

As I promise, it's December and I am back to post!  See the furniture and the fresh paint on the wall?  I've made this house a home, don't you think?  I hope you've enjoyed whatever it was that you got yourself at the corner store while waiting.

So, what is "A Truth Universally Acknowledged" (aka atua) and what's its purpose in life?  Excellent question! 



The Austen fans will have recognized it as the opening sentence of Pride and Prejudice, "It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife."  I decided to use it as my blog title because I admire Jane Austen's work but also wanted something that would set the tone of the blog; literature and writing will be discussed here.  Also, should I suddenly decide I want to talk about the life cycle of cacti or the eating habit of pumas, it's flexible enough not to bind me to a very specific niche.

As to the purpose, I intend to use this little corner of the Internet to get my writing out there for the world to see.  It will also help me keep track of my progress and, let's be honest, it will also force me to write regularly.  I love writing, but it seems I always have something "better" to do.  With atua, I will have to answer to you, my readers, when I don't post anything.  Please be merciless. 

The structure will most likely vary at the beginning until I find a format that works well, so I invite you to comment as much as you can; your input will help me greatly. I wish to post writing prompts to share and explore with other bloggers and readers as well as information regarding my work in progress and my tribulations as a writer. I intend to post regularly but not daily.  For day-to-day activity, make sure to check my facebook page or my twitter feed.

Now, as promised, here is the first writing prompt of atua.  Note that all the prompts will come from a book called 642 Things to Write About and that the selection is made with an online random number generator.

Prompt 216 - Something you never told your mother

Please feel free to use this prompt for your writing, but make sure to post whatever you come up with in the comment section (any language is welcome however I will not be able to understand anything else than English, French, Japanese or Spanish.)  I will post mine next Sunday, along with the next prompt.


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